Are organic foods worth the extra money?

Hello, Mary! You explained your opinion clearly and gave a balanced perspective. I like how you mentioned that organic food may not be necessary for everyone but can be important for people with health conditions or for babies. Your examples made your reasoning easy to understand. To improve your writing, focus on small grammar points such as articles (“a mature immune system”), verb forms (“doesn’t affect”), and using more natural expressions like “worth it” and “the same applies to.” Overall, your ideas were logical and well organized. Keep up the good work, your explanations are becoming more thoughtful and precise each time.

-Teacher Wela 

For me, it isn\'t worth.

>>  For me, it isn’t worth it.

Because I entirely don\'t consider the vegetable is organic or non-organic.

>> Because I don’t really consider whether vegetables are organic or non-organic.

Although the food is non-organic, it can\'t be affect my health because I already have mature immune system.

>> Even if the food is non-organic, it doesn’t affect my health because I already have a mature immune system.

However, if someone has specific disease that is fatal to something like pesticides, organic foods worth enough for them.

>> However, if someone has a specific disease that is sensitive to substances like pesticides, organic food is worth it for them.

Also, it\'s same with a baby who don\'t have immune system.

>> The same applies to babies who don’t have a fully developed immune system.

If I have a baby, I also try to give her organic food rather than non-organic food even if it\'s cost is more expensive.

>>  If I had a baby, I would try to give her organic food rather than non-organic food, even if it costs more.