Are parenting skills different from women and men?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A fantastic Friday night to you!
Thank you for sending in this marvelous composition.^^
I do agree with you! But I think the role of the father will be always there. ^^
I had fun tonight, the topic was really interesting.
I don\'t really understand the reason why the government wants to impose those such measures.
You did a SUPERB job with your composition! Keep it up! See you on Monday!
Treat yourself this weekend! Please go over the corrections below and if you have any questions, feel free to tell it in class.
Have a great weekend. Take care!
Teacher Nina
The role of a father has been culturally defined and is often stereotyped.
>> Correct!
Fathers were to be the breadwinners, often emotionally distant as they worked to provide safety and financial stability for the family.
>> Did you mean: Fathers were breadwinners, often emotionally distant as they worked to provide safety and financial stability for the family.
>> OR: Fathers are to be the breadwinner, often emotional due to the distance because of work to provide safety and financially stability for the family.
Many fathers accepted these stereotypes and even added to the role by being the primary disciplinarian.
>> Correct!
For example, a child might not be spanked until the father came home to do it.
>> Correct!
In many ways being a father was very distinct from being a mother.
>> Correct!
Fathers did one thing. Mothers did another.
>> Did you mnean: Fathers did one thing for the family while the mother did another responsibility.
There was little coparenting or sharing of ideas in traditional households.
>> There is a little co-parenting and sharing of ideas in traditional households.
Roles were separate and expectations were clear.
>> Correct!
>> Better: The roles were separated and expectations were clear.
>> OR: The roles are different and the expectations are clear.
While women are expected to be the primary provider of emotional support for children.
>> Correct!
A child identifies strongly with the mother, and even if the child is of opposite gender, it has been the role of the mother to pass on gender expectations.
>> A child identifies the mother strongly and even if the child is of the opposite gender, it has been the role of the mother to pass on the gender expectations.
But in the Korean society, a farther\'s role has been disappearing because a mothter takes care of everything.
>> But in the Korean society, the father\'s role has been disappearing because the mother takes care of everything.
>> OR: But in the Korean society, the father\'s role has been disappearing because the mother takes the full responsibility.
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