Are parents good teacher?
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Hi!^^
I agree. Parents are the first teachers for anyone. They can be the best or the worst teacher, depending on how they raise their children.
One friend of mine told me that being educated cannot be equal to the importance of the way our parents raised us.
Thank you for generously answering the question.
Take care and see you in class! :)
~Teacher Giselle~
Yes, I totally agree with this statement.
>>Correct!
For example, in my case I learn lots of lessons from my parents.
>>For example, in my case, I learned a lot of lessons from my parents.
I know it is very tunnel vision.
>>I know it is kind of a tunnel vision.
And nowadays, many bad parents affect their children badly.
>>Correct!
When we were born, we first watched our parents.
>>Correct!
or
>> The first people that we saw and watched after we were born were our parents.
Also, we got relationship first with parents.
>>The first relationship that we establish is with our parents.
We follow them unavoidably.
>>Correct!
So I think the parents are good, if so they are good teachers.
>>So I think that if parents are good, they they can be good teachers.
they arenot good parents, if so they are bad teachers.
>>If they are not good parents, then they are bad teachers.
Anyway they are teachers who are their children\'s model.
>>Anyway, they are teachers who become their children\'s models.
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