Are parents who feed junk food to their children irresponsible?
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If the parents only feed junk food to their children, that is irreponsible parenting.
However, we would eat junk food at least once for a whole life.
So, it is not irresponsible to feed junk sometimes.
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If the parents only feed junk food to their children, that is irreponsible parenting.
>> If parents only feed their children junk food, it is considered irresponsible parenting.
However, we would eat junk food at least once for a whole life.
>> However, eating junk food occasionally throughout one\'s life is common.
So, it is not irresponsible to feed junk sometimes.
>> Therefore, feeding children junk food sometimes is not necessarily irresponsible
>> If parents only feed their children junk food, it is considered irresponsible parenting.
However, we would eat junk food at least once for a whole life.
>> However, eating junk food occasionally throughout one\'s life is common.
So, it is not irresponsible to feed junk sometimes.
>> Therefore, feeding children junk food sometimes is not necessarily irresponsible
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