Are people bron evil or good?
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Most people believe that we are inherently born good. Others say that people are born evil. And there are some people who believe that people are born with certain inclinations, 50% of which makes up who we are. The other 50% is purely environmental. I think that people aren't born good or bad, but change according to what they experience and how they are treated. Even some heinous criminals had a very good childhood, showing that he/she ever really was wicked. Nobody has a reason to be wicked from the start. Most people become wicked throughout their life. Life makes us wicked. Growing up and getting older make us wicked. The whole concept of wickedness or evil depends on the society we are raised in. We can't say that our genes totally decide who we are, and that the same goes for environmental causes. To me, though, there's probably a lot more environmental than genetic. We should believe in ourselves. We can change our life. If we have strong will, we can decide who we'll be.
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Hi Sir [이름] ^0^
Thank you for allotting some time to do your homework.
Well said. I do agree with you. Environmental factors can really change us.
It depends on how we are going to handle it.
You did a magnificent job today.
I really enjoy reading your essays.
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Most people believe that we are inherently born good.
>> Correct!
Others say that people are born evil.
>> Correct!
And there are some people who believe that people are born with certain inclinations, 50% of which makes up who we are.
>> Correct!
The other 50% is purely environmental.
>> Correct!
I think that people aren\'t born good or bad, but change according to what they experience and how they are treated.
>> I think that people aren\'t born good or bad, but it changes according to what they experience and how they are treated.
Even some heinous criminals had a very good childhood, showing that he/she ever really was wicked.
>> Correct!
Nobody has a reason to be wicked from the start.
>> Correct!
Most people become wicked throughout their life.
>> Correct!
Life makes us wicked.
>> Correct!
Growing up and getting older make us wicked.
>> Correct!
The whole concept of wickedness or evil depends on the society we are raised in.
>> Correct!
We can\'t say that our genes totally decide who we are, and that the same goes for environmental causes.
>> Correct!
>> OR: We can\'t say that our genes totally decide who we are, and that the same goes for environmental factors.
To me, though, there\'s probably a lot more environmental than genetic.
>> Correct!
We should believe in ourselves.
>> Correct!
We can change our life.
>> Correct!
If we have strong will, we can decide who we\'ll be.
>> Correct!
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