Are people more likely to be productive and successful when they ignore what other people say?
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People are likely to be affected by what other people say. We try to live our lives independently. Some consultants recommend that we do not pay too much attention to what other people say. However, it is quite natural that humans are social animals and we live together with others. We all are affected by people around us. We feel happy or miserable because of people we interact with every day. Sometimes, it is necessary that we should not be mindful of what others think about us. The key to success lies in believing in our talents and having confidence in the decisions we make. Do our own ways although we look like freaks to others. Especially if you are working for art, you should be creative and crazy about something you like although ordinary people will think that it is weird. However, a majority of people are employeed and we have to work together with our supervisors and colleagues. Such situations do restrict us to do our own ways.
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Happy hump day Sir [이름]!
I hope that the weather is fine today.
Great ideas about the topic.
There are times that we are really affected by other people.
But what you\'ve mentioned below, we should always be confident, believe in ourselves.
We are the ones who are responsible for our actions.
Have a great day.Teacher Nina
People are likely to be affected by what other people say.
>> Correct
>> OR: People are likely to be affected by other\'s opinion towards him/ her.
We try to live our lives independently.
>> Correct
Some consultants recommend that we do not pay too much attention to what other people say.
>> Correct
However, it is quite natural that humans are social animals and we live together with others.
>> Correct
We all are affected by people around us.
>> We are all affected by the people around us.
We feel happy or miserable because of people we interact with every day.
>> Correct
Sometimes, it is necessary that we should not be mindful of what others think about us.
>> Correct
The key to success lies in believing in our talents and having confidence in the decisions we make.
>> Correct
Do our own ways although we look like freaks to others.
>> Correct
Especially if you are working for art, you should be creative and crazy about something you like although ordinary people will think that it is weird.
>> Correct
However, a majority of people are employeed and we have to work together with our supervisors and colleagues.
>> Correct
>> OR: However, most people are employed and we have to work, mingle with our boss and colleagues.
Such situations do restrict us to do our own ways.
>> Correct
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