Are pet abandonment common in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is on aired that animal TV program show \"Animal Farm\" in Korea.
The program shows a various animal\'s life with their mater
Sometimes It used to show animal\'s abandonment and abuse.
In the case of a pet abandonment, it happens especially people\'s vacation in Island.
They who is pet abandonment are unqualified to raise a pet
I think that they brought a pet because that is only beautiful and cute.
But when they brought one they realized that a pet needs many love and care than they thought.
So they abandon a pet in their vacation to Island.
Local residents are victim. They are pained due to many pet abandonment.
In my case, of course I love animals but I don\'t want to raise a pet.
I live in apartment. This space is not suitable to raise a pet.
Especially I don\'t want to see my pet die someday.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. Yes, raising a pet requires a huge responsibility. Not anyone can do it.
- T. Beth
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It is on aired that animal TV program show \"Animal Farm\" in Korea.>>> A TV program about animals called \"Animal Farm\" is being aired in Korea.
The program shows a various animal\'s life with their mater
The program shows a various animal\'s life with their mater
>>> The program shows various animals\' lives with their owners.
Sometimes It used to show animal\'s abandonment and abuse.
>>> Sometimes, it shows animal abandonment and abuse.
In the case of a pet abandonment, it happens especially people\'s vacation in Island.
>>> In the case of a pet abandonment, it happens especially on people\'s vacation in an island.
They who is pet abandonment are unqualified to raise a pet
>>> They who is abandon their pets are not qualified to raise a pet.
I think that they brought a pet because that is only beautiful and cute.
>>> I think that they brought a pet only because it seemed beautiful and cute.
But when they brought one they realized that a pet needs many love and care than they thought.
>>> correct
So they abandon a pet in their vacation to Island.
So they abandon a pet in their vacation to Island.
>>> So they abandon the pet on their vacation in an island.
Local residents are victim.
>>> Local residents are victims.
They are pained due to many pet abandonment.
>>> OR: They suffer from a lot of pet abandonment.
In my case, of course I love animals but I don\'t want to raise a pet.
In my case, of course I love animals but I don\'t want to raise a pet.
>>> correct
I live in apartment.
I live in apartment.
>>> I live in an apartment.
This space is not suitable to raise a pet.
>>> correct
Especially I don\'t want to see my pet die someday.
Especially I don\'t want to see my pet die someday.
>>> correct
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