Are risk-takers more successful in life?
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Nooooooooooooooo!! I don\'t believe there is no one who didn\'t take risks. Also, as far as I\'m concerned there is only the one who has endured long periods of risk succeed. So, I personally don\'t think your question. I want to introduce one of the players about League of Legend is Faker. He made his debut in 2013, he\'s still working as a player with the successful career for 10 years. It seems that it\'s not that people who go through a lot of trials succeed, it\'s just risks, and people who endure for a long time succeed.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Nooooooooooooooo!! I don\'t believe there is no one who didn\'t take risks.
>> CORRECT!Also, as far as I\'m concerned there is only the one who has endured long periods of risk succeed.
>> Also, as far as I\'m concerned there is only one who has endured long periods of risks to succeed.
So, I personally don\'t think your question.
>> So, about the question, I personally don\'t think so.
I want to introduce one of the players about League of Legend is Faker.
>> CORRECT!He made his debut in 2013, he\'s still working as a player with the successful career for 10 years.
>> CORRECT!It seems that it\'s not that people who go through a lot of trials succeed, it\'s just risks, and people who endure for a long time succeed.
>> It seems that not all people who go through a lot of trials succeed, those are just risks, and people who endure for a long time succeed.
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