Are romantic movies damaging real relationships?
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Are romantic movies damaging real relationships?
I don\'t think romantic movies are damaging real relationships.
>>I don\'t think romantic movies are damaging to real relationships.
Not only that, I think they can bring us a good effect in relationships.
>>Not only that, I think they can affect our relationships in a good way.
People are usually not familiar with other people who have another gender.
>>People are usually not familiar with the opposite sex.
They can\'t understand each other.
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or>>It’s hard for them to understand each other.
By watching romantic movies, they are able to understand each other.
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or>>They can understand each other through watching movies.
Men can know what women like, and also women can check what men like.
>>Men can understand women more and what they like, also, women will be able to know what men like.
Although romantic movies are a little different from our realities, we can get some tips from them.
>>Although, romantic movies are a little different from the reality, we can get some tips from them.
Likewise, romantic movies give us positive influences, not negative effect.
>>Likewise, romantic movies have a positive influence, not just negative ones.
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