Are simple joys as valuable as complex experiences?

Hi, [이름]! ^_^
This is another great essay. 

I loved the wisdom in your words and the sincerity in your examples.    

It is true that people tend to look at the simple joys in day-to-day life because they are too focused on achieving their goals.

I hope you find simple joys in everything.

See you later. ^_^
~Teacher Charry :)

I think simple joys are as valuable as complex experiences.

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First, life with only complex experiences make people tough.

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What I mean is that we can learn many things from complex experiences but we can\'t live without simple joys as well.

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It is because that if our life comes up only with complex experiences, we should awalys learn from them, then our life is going to be very tough.

>> It is because if our life is only made up of complex experiences, we should awalys learn from them and as a result, our life is going to be very tough.

Since sometimes there are simple joys between complex experiences, we can be rexled and powerful.

>> Since sometimes there are simple joys between complex experiences, we can feel relaxed and empowered.
Also, simple joys are our part of life as well.

>> Also, simple joys are part of our life as well.

For example, we can\'t always win in Oympics like legendary athletes nor climb Everrest mountains like famous climbers.

>> For example, we can\'t always win in the Oympics like legendary athletes do nor climb the Everest mountain like the famous climbers.

Rather, talking with friends at cafe or spending time with family at warm house is more realistic.

>> Rather, talking with friends at a cafe or spending time with family at a warm house is more realistic.

The kind of experiences make simple joys and infuse vitality into one\'s life.

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For these reasons, I think simple joys are as valuable as complex experiences.

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