Are smartphones running our world?

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I want to write both of good and bad points.

>> I want to write both of the good and bad points.
But i want to focus of bad point.
>> But I want to focus on the bad points.

Convenience all of life, but get worse dependance of smartphones.

>> Smartphones provide convenience in all aspects of life but the worst part is too much dependence on them.

So we are brains become stupid.

>> So, our brains become stupid.

Because we don\'t have remember all things.

>> It\'s because we don\'t have to remember all things.
And getting low offline comunication with people.

>> We also lose the chance to personally communicate with other people.
People meet all online so people dont have talking to face.

>> People all meet online so they don\'t have to talk face-to-face.

Meet people lower that we are social become individualism.

>> [Do you mean]: Even if we are social beings, we are slowly mastering individualism.