Are snap judgments better than decisions to which people give a lot of thought?

2018-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think that snap judgments are not better than decisions to which people give a lot of thought. First, we can make an emotional decision and take mistakes. What I mean is that sometimes when we are very upset at something, we are caought in emotion. Unfortunately, in this situation, we should still make a decision . If we use snape judgement at that time, we can take a lot of mistakes and regret it at last. It is because that we can't be free from emotion entirely when we are in snape jusdgement. Also, snap judgement can't help make a important decision. For example, when we consider about our future plans which we can't turn over easily, if we rely on snap judgement that is because it makes headache to us, we will regret it. Since we should think a lot about many things including ourselves. Snap judgement makes everything simple and quick but it can't guarantee anything. For these reasons, I think snap judgments are not better than decisions to which people give a lot of thought.

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I think that snap judgments are not better than decisions to which people give a lot of thought.

>> CORRECT!

First, we can make an emotional decision and take mistakes.

>> First, we can make an emotional decision and make mistakes.

What I mean is that sometimes when we are very upset at something, we are caought in emotion.

>> What I mean is that sometimes when we are very upset at something, we are caught in our emotion

Unfortunately, in this situation, we should still make a decision .

>> CORRECT!

If we use snape judgement at that time, we can take a lot of mistakes and regret it at last.

>> If we use snap judgment at that time, we can make a lot of mistakes and regret it at last

It is because that we can\'t be free from emotion entirely when we are in snape jusdgement.

>> It is because we can\'t be free from our emotion entirely when we are making a snap judgment.

Also, snap judgement can\'t help make a important decision.

>> Also, snap judgment can\'t help make a important decision.

For example, when we consider about our future plans which we can\'t turn over easily, if we rely on snap judgement that is because it makes headache to us, we will regret it.

>> For example, when we consider about our future plans which we can\'t turn over easily and rely on snap judgment, we would end up having a headache and regret it.

Since we should think a lot about many things including ourselves.

>> This is because we should think a lot about many things including ourselves.

Snap judgement makes everything simple and quick but it can\'t guarantee anything.

>> Snap judgment makes everything simple and quick but it can\'t guarantee anything.

For these reasons, I think snap judgments are not better than decisions to which people give a lot of thought.

>> CORRECT!

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