Are social networking sites good for our society?

2020-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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social networking sites are good for us. first, we can communicate with other many people without contacting. and, could talk with friend directly who lives in another country. also, study English and other language through various root. even, we don\'t need to go. but we can have provided education from native speakers. there are lots of good things using social networking.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]-Li!
I would like to thank you for diligently writing an essay tonight.
I agree that social networking sites are useful.

But there are times when I think that they\'re not good because they sometimes have violent or sexual contents that are not very suitable with young people (like me. LOL)

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a beautiful evening with your loved ones.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Charry


social networking sites are good for us.
>> Social networking sites are good for us.
first, we can communicate with other many people without contacting.
>> First, we can communicate with other people without having a close contact with them.
and, could talk with friend directly who lives in another country.

>> In addition, I could talk with a friend who lives in another country directly.

OR >> In addition, I could directly talk with a friend who lives in another country.
also, study English and other language through various root.
>> [Do you mean]: Also, studying English and other languages through various routes is possible.
even, we don\'t need to go. but we can have provided education from native speakers.
>> We don\'t even need to go to those places. We can have education
from native speakers through social media.
there are lots of good things using social networking.

>> There are lots of good things that we can do using social networking sites.


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