Are social networking sites good for our society? Why or why not?

Hi, Sian!

Thanks for writing this wonderful essay. ^_^
You\'ve pointed out your opinion about this matter quite well and I totally agree that the secret is to use social networks in moderation.

I hope you\'re having a great day!

See you later in class. ^^

~Teacher Charry

Social networking is a convenient communication system that enables people to contact through the Internet and on their mobile phones easily these days.

>> Social networking is a convenient communication system that enables people to easily contact each other through the Internet and on their mobile phones these days.

However it is a double-edged sword, because when you use it correctly, it makes people very convinient.

>> However, it is a double-edged sword. When you use it correctly, it makes it very convenient for people.

For example, social networking makes people intimate through the mobile correspondence through e-mail or other chat services.

>> CORRECT!

And in the working process, you can contanct with other coworkers or business partners efficiently which reduces the unnecessary time waste.

>> And in the working process, you can contact other coworkers or business partners efficiently which reduces the unnecessary time waste.

But when you use it inappropriately, social network can undermine a quality of your life.

>> But when you use it inappropriately, social network can undermine the quality of your life.

For instance, on Instagram or Facebook, you can see many people who boast their vacatio n, trip or their appearance, and it can make your dignity(confidence) worser than you haven\'t saw them.

>> For instance, on Instagram or Facebook, you can see many people who boast their vacation, trip or their appearance, and it can make your dignity or confidence worse than when you haven\'t seen them.

So, for your healthy mental condition, you have to control the time using social networking, and you will be a wise consumer of the social network.

>> CORRECT!