Are some languages more beautiful to listen to than others? If so which? Are there any languages tha

2015-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Although I do not speak French, people say that French sounds elegant, romantic, and relaxing. Indeed, when I hear French on TV or a movie, it sounds like bells ringing when spoken. It is beautiful. It is like a song thanks to the intonation and soft pronunciation. Chinese can sound a little bit aloud and noisy. When I sometimes fly China Airline that mostly carries Chinese passengers, I feel like they are making an argument or actually fighting each other. Americans seem to worship the way English people speak English. They tend to speak less R sounds than Americans. Americans also do not sound T in most cases, which is not attractive to the people who prefer a mechanical sound that can be often heard in the German language. Some people like the harshness of German or Dutch. They sound so crisp, dark, powerful and mechanical. Japanese and Korean are like the Asian versions of multisyllabic languages but much more crisp than many other multisyllabic languages.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

Thanks for sharing your experiences in writing.

I really like listening to people who speak French.

But I think that language is really difficult to learn.

Do you have any plans to learn another language aside from English?

Please tell me about it in class.

Languages are really different from each other that makes it beautiful.

I hope that you had a wonderful day at work.

I am excited to hear your ideas in class.

Teacher Nina


Although I do not speak French, people say that French sounds elegant, romantic, and relaxing.

>> correct

>> Better: Although I do not speak French, people say that it sounds elegant, romantic and relaxing.

Indeed, when I hear French on TV or a movie, it sounds like bells ringing when spoken.

>> correct

It is beautiful.

>> correct

It is like a song thanks to the intonation and soft pronunciation.

>> correct

>> It is like a song, thanks to the intonation and soft pronunciation.

Chinese can sound a little bit aloud and noisy.

>> Did you mean: Chinese can sound a bit loud and noisy.

When I sometimes fly China Airline that mostly carries Chinese passengers, I feel like they are making an argument or actually fighting each other.

>> Did you mean: I sometimes fly by China Airline that mostly carries Chinese passengers, I feel like they are having an argument or actually fighting.

>> OR: I sometimes fly by China Airline that mostly carries Chinese passengers, I feel like they are arguing or fighting with each other.

Americans seem to worship the way English people speak English.

>> correct

>> Americans seem to worship the way English native speakers talk.

They tend to speak less R sounds than Americans.

>> correct

Americans also do not sound T in most cases, which is not attractive to the people who prefer a mechanical sound that can be often heard in the German language.

>> correct

>> Americans also don\'t pronounce T sound in most cases, which is not attractive to the people who prefer a mechanical sound that can be often heard in German language.

Some people like the harshness of German or Dutch.

>> correct

They sound so crisp, dark, powerful and mechanical.

>> correct

Japanese and Korean are like the Asian versions of multisyllabic languages but much more crisp than many other multisyllabic languages.

>> correct

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