Are some lives more valuable than others?
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It is written that all human are equal in the law and I strongly believe it.
>> Correct!
I do not think some lives are more valuable than others.
>> Correct!
Because we are all same, we were born without any assets, property and position in the society.
>> Correct!
Nobody can say life of president in the country is more valuable than others.
>> Nobody can say that the life of the president in the country is more valuable than others.
However, if babies, CEO of SAMSUNG, famous actor are drown in the water, I am not sure who need to be saved.
>> However, if babies, the CEO of SAMSUNG, and famous actors are drowning in the water, I am not sure if who I need to save first.
When fire break out in the building, I know that fireman have their manual.
>> When there is a fire break out in the building, I know that firemen have their manuals.
I think if there are babies, adults, women and man in the building, they will save babies first.
>> I think if there are babies, adults, women and men in the building, they will first save the babies.
This is agreement in the society and everybody agree with this.
>> This is an agreement in the society and everybody agreed to this.
The question you gave me is difficult to answer.
>> Correct!
Nobody can not give the correct answer.
>> Nobody can give the correct answer.
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