Are some lives more valuable than others?

2018-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

It is written that all human are equal in the law and I strongly believe it. I do not think some lives are more valuable than others. Because we are all same, we were born without any assets, property and position in the society. Nobody can say life of president in the country is more valuable than others. However, if babies, CEO of SAMSUNG, famous actor are drown in the water, I am not sure who need to be saved. When fire break out in the building, I know that fireman have their manual. I think if there are babies, adults, women and man in the building, they will save babies first. This is agreement in the society and everybody agree with this. The question you gave me is difficult to answer. Nobody can not give the correct answer.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

Hats off to you! You were able to express your own thoughts to this question. Yes, it\'s a tricky question but you nailed it. Just one thing, you have to be careful in using articles \"a, an, the\". You did a great job!

See you around!^^

~Teacher Eunice


It is written that all human are equal in the law and I strongly believe it. 
>> Correct!
I do not think some lives are more valuable than others.

>> Correct!
Because we are all same, we were born without any assets, property and position in the society.

>> Correct!
Nobody can say life of president in the country is more valuable than others.
>> Nobody can say that the life of the president in the country is more valuable than others.
However, if babies, CEO of SAMSUNG, famous actor are drown in the water, I am not sure who need to be saved.
 >> However, if babies, the CEO of SAMSUNG, and famous actors are drowning in the water, I am not sure if who I need to save first.
When fire break out in the building, I know that fireman have their manual.
 >> When there is a fire break out in the building, I know that firemen have their manuals.
I think if there are babies, adults, women and man in the building, they will save babies first.
>> I think if there are babies, adults, women and men in the building, they will first save the babies.
This is agreement in the society and everybody agree with this.
 >> This is an agreement in the society and everybody agreed to this.
The question you gave me is difficult to answer.
>> Correct!
 Nobody can not give the correct answer.
>> Nobody can give the correct answer.

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