Are songs significant in life? Why?

2019-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes, Muisic can create various atmosphere such as exciting, romantic, teaceful, calm. So when people want to change atmosphere, they turn on the music. And I often listen to music, when I want to relieve stress. That give me a comfort.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. Music is indeed necessary. It is also one of the ways we can express and convey our emotions, through music.

- T. Beth

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Yes, Muisic can create various atmosphere such as exciting, romantic, teaceful, calm.

>>>   Yes, music can create various atmosphere such as exciting, romantic, peaceful, and calm.

So when people want to change atmosphere, they turn on the music.

>>>  So when people want to change the atmosphere, they turn on the music. 
 And I often listen to music, when I want to relieve stress.

>>> CORRECT. 

That give me a comfort.

>>> That gives me comfort.   

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