Are superpowers real?
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Hello there, Gabby!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
The story you shared gave me the creeps. Kkk~
Anyhow, thank you for sharing ^^
I do belive superpower\'s existence in the world.
>> I do believe in superpowers\' existence in the world.
Let me introduce a story that there was a man who has a sister but they were living apart from each other.
>> Let me tell you a story, there\'s a man who had a sister but they were living apart.
>> OR: Let me tell you a story, there\'s a man who had a sister but they were living far from each other.
One day there was an accident to her so she couldn\'t live any longer.
>> One day, his sister met an accident and died because of that.
On that day his passed mother showed up in his dream and said \"Go to your sister\".
>> On that day, their mom, who passed away, showed up in his dream and said: \"Go to your sister.\"
He could know what happend to his sister and take care of her body.
>> He knew what happened to his sister and took care of her body and made the arrangements.
This story is real in Korea and I heard like those kinds of story many times.
>> This story is real in Korea and I heard a lot of stories like this many times.
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