Are the board games in the present better or worse than the board games in the past?

2019-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

I have played board games first when I reached twenties. It was called \"burumarble\" in Korean. That is the game which need to buy countries when we arrive the places by rolling the dice and if somebody come to my place that I bought it before they came, they need to pay for the specific amount of fake money. The game would be ended, if everybody lost their money except one guy. I have played board games these days too, because my son would like to play with me. I didn\'t feel excited when I played it, because board games were not things I liked. I am too old to play it and that\'s why I don\'t feel fun of it. I think that board games are almost same in the present and in the past. I can\'t tell what are the differences between them.

강사 첨삭

A great Tuesday, Sir [이름]!

Is Burumarble identical with the Monopoly, Sir? I kinda have a feeling that they are the same. It\'s fun to play board games, but if it would take hours to finish the game then I get easily bored as well. Thank you and see in class!

~Teacher Eunice


I have played board games first when I reached twenties. 

>>> I have played the board games for the first time when I reached twenties. 

It was called \"burumarble\" in Korean.

>>> correct!

That is the game which need to buy countries when we arrive the places by rolling the dice and if somebody come to my place that I bought it before they came, they need to pay for the specific amount of fake money.

>>> It is a game which we need to buy countries when we arrive to the places by rolling the dice, and if somebody landed on the place that I bought, they need to pay for the specific amount using the fake money.  

The game would be ended, if everybody lost their money except one guy. 

>>> The game would be ended if everybody lost their money except for one guy.

>>> OR: The game will end if everybody loses their money except for one player. 

I have played board games these days too, because my son would like to play with me.

>>> I\'m playing  board games these days too, because my son likes to play with me.

I didn\'t feel excited when I played it, because board games were not things I liked.

>>> I didn\'t feel excited when I played it, because board games were not the things I liked.  

I am too old to play it and that\'s why I don\'t feel fun of it.

>>> I am too old to play it and that\'s why I don\'t feel fun playing it.  

I think that board games are almost same in the present and in the past.

>>> I think that board games are almost the same in the present and in the past.

I can\'t tell what are the differences between them.

>>> correct!

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