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i am little late! sorry ^^;; i think SNS has a many side effect. First it make poeple to live in fake world. I saw a girl on TV who only communicate other people through smart phone. She take a picture herself and fix her face. She modify her picture until she is stisfied with her picture. But modified picture is not her face! So she can't meet person face to face. SNS make people more disconnected. Second SNS make people unhappy. i saw result of research that SNS make poeple unhappy. They say that people compare their life with other life in the SNS. And they think "why don't i live like that? why don't i have this nice car and house?". I think sns has a good side like that we can communicate other who live far away, but if we are eagle to live other people's life throught SNS, we should be unhappy and hate our life.

Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ Don\'t worry about it! I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. Please always capitalize the word \"I\". Let\'s talk more about this in our class. See you later! ~T.Chelsea i am little late! sorry ^^;; >> I\'m a bit late! Sorry^^i think SNS has a many side effect. >> I think has many side effects. First it make poeple to live in fake world. >> First, it makes people live in a fake world. I saw a girl on TV who only communicate other people through smart phone. >> I saw a girl on TV who only communicate with other people through smart phone. She take a picture herself and fix her face. >> She took a picture of herself and fixed her face. She modify her picture until she is stisfied with her picture. >> She modified her picture until she was satisfied with it. But modified picture is not her face! >> But the picture was modified and it\'s not her face! So she can\'t meet person face to face. >> So she can\'t meet other people face to face. SNS make people more disconnected. >> SNS makes people more disconnected.Second SNS make people unhappy. >> Second, SNS makes people unhappy. i saw result of research that SNS make poeple unhappy. >> I saw the result of a research that SNS makes people unhappy.They say that people compare their life with other life in the SNS. >> They say that people compare their lives with other people\'s lives in SNS. >> According to them, people compare their lives with other people\'s lives in SNS. And they think \"why don\'t i live like that? why don\'t i have this nice car and house?\". >> And they think \"Why don\'t I live like that? Why don\'t I have this nice car and house?\"I think sns has a good side like that we can communicate other who live far away, but if we are eagle to live other people\'s life throught SNS, we should be unhappy and hate our life. >> I think SNS has an advantafe like, we can communicate with others who live in a far place, but if we covet other people\'s lives through SNS, we could be unhappy and we might hate our life.