Are the penalties for drinking and driving strict enough in your country?
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I don't think that the penalties for drunk-driving are enough to diminish drinking and driving. Some people don't care of paying a fine, and they are not afraid of being engaged in punishment. Such a generous treatment should cause a lot of serious traffic accidnets from drinking and driving.
Drunk-driving should be punished severly because drunk-drivers might endanger the other people's lives and they drive their cars intentionally under the influence of alcohol. I believe tht such a strict measure would make a great contribution for reduing the rate of drinking and driving.
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Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for answering the questions from your homework. Anyway, you did great in expressing yourself here. I agree to your opinion. I believe that a harsher punishment should be imposed to let drunk-drivers learn their lessons. Moreover, with regards to your composition, I can say that it\'s good. However, you need to be mindful of the proper prepositions and words to be used in your sentences. Anyway, I\'ll help you with it. Keep safe then and Ill see you later! Have a happy Friday!
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I don\'t think that the penalties for drunk-driving are enough to diminish drinking and driving.
>> Correct
OR> I don\'t think that that penalties for drunk-driving are strong enough to punish the drunk-drivers.
Some people don\'t care of paying a fine, and they are not afraid of being engaged in punishment.
>> Some people don\'t care about paying a fine and aren\'t afraid of being engaged in a punishment.
OR> Some people don\'t care about paying a penalty and aren\'t afraid of being punished.
Such a generous treatment should cause a lot of serious traffic accidnets from drinking and driving.
>> Such a generous treatment would cause a lot of serious traffic accidents from drinking and driving. (Be cautious of the correct spelling: accidents)
Drunk-driving should be punished severly because drunk-drivers might endanger the other people\'s lives and they drive their cars intentionally under the influence of alcohol.
>> There should be a strict penalty or punishment for drunk-driving because it can endanger other people\'s lives since drunk-drivers drive their cars intentionally though they\'re under the influence of alcohol.
I believe tht such a strict measure would make a great contribution for reduing the rate of drinking and driving.
>> I believe that such a strict measure would make a great contribution in reducing the rate of drunk-driving.
OR> I believe that a strict measure measure will surely make a great contribution in reducing the rate of drunk-driving.
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