Are the penalties for drinking and driving strict enough in your contry?
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This is great, Sir Hwang!
The punishment of violating traffic regulations should be more rigid. They should also consider revoking driving license for failing to comply with this rule. See you in class!
~Teacher Eunice
My contry doesn\'t strict about the penalties for drinking and driving then America and Europ.
>>> My country isn\'t strict about the penalties for drunk driving than America and Europe.
When you drink and drive, If your Blood Alcohol Content is 0.3 persent less, It is simple drunk that you doesn\'t be punishment.
>>> When you\'re drunk driving, but your blood alcohol content is 0.3 percent less, it is just a normal intoxication, so you don\'t get punished.
And if a person is dies, he or she will be given only i yeaer of organic punishment, unless it\'s a hit and run.
>>> If a person dies, he or she will be detained for a year as a punishment by law, unless it\'s a hit and run.
Recently the penalties for drinking and driving of korea has changed, So it\'s expected that the law will become more strict in future.
>>> Recently, the penalties for drunk driving in Korea has changed, so it\'s expected that the law will become more strict in the future.
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