Are ther any books that have had a profound impact on your life of the way you view the world?

2023-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

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The author was a professor named Kim Nan-do, and the title of the book was \'It hurts because it\'s youth.\' It is the title of the book atrracted my attention. I read this book when I was a high school student, and I suffered physically and mentally due to grades. Due to a lot of stress, I gained more 20 kilograms and got into the habit of binge eating. I gained a lot of weight, so my self-esteem decreased, and I was depressed, my personality became sensitive, so I fought with my mom every day. It was a book about self-development, but it helped me a lot to come across this book and control myself during my sick time. I was able to accept my sick time positively and I looked back on myself, so I could be comforted. Thanks to this book, I was able to overcome difficult times smoothly with comfort. I am still trying to overcome difficult things positively, thinking funny, \"Oh my gosh. Luckily, God thinks I\'m still youth.\"

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! This is heartwarming. I appreciate you sharing this. I\'m delighted that you\'ve overcome such hindrances and are now developing into the wonderful person that you are. That\'s fantastic. Thanks for this, [이름]. See you in class tomorrow!
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Are there any books that have had a profound impact on your life of the way you view the world?
The author was a professor named Kim Nan-do, and the title of the book was \'It hurts because it\'s youth.\' 
>> Correct
It is the title of the book atrracted my attention.
>> It is the title of the book that attracted my attention.
I read this book when I was a high school student, and I suffered physically and mentally due to grades.
>> Correct
Due to a lot of stress, I gained more 20 kilograms and got into the habit of binge eating.
>> Due to a lot of stress, I gained more than 20 kilograms and got into the habit of binge eating.
I gained a lot of weight, so my self-esteem decreased, and I was depressed, my personality became sensitive, so I fought with my mom every day.
>> I gained a lot of weight, so my self-esteem decreased, and I was depressed. My personality became sensitive, so I fought with my mom every day.
It was a book about self-development, but it helped me a lot to come across this book and control myself during my sick time.
>> Correct
I was able to accept my sick time positively and I looked back on myself, so I could be comforted.
>> I was able to accept my sick time positively, and I looked back on myself, so I could find comfort.
Thanks to this book, I was able to overcome difficult times smoothly with comfort.
>> Correct
I am still trying to overcome difficult things positively, thinking funny, \"Oh my gosh. Luckily, God thinks I\'m still youth.\"
>> I am still trying to overcome difficult things positively, thinking, \"Oh my gosh. Luckily, God thinks I\'m still youthful.\"

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