Are there a lot of immigrants in your community?
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Here are my corrections for you:
I think there are not many immigrants in our country.
>> CORRECT!
I think so, because I didn\'t heard that there are many immigrants problems.
>> I think this because I haven\'t heard that there are many immigrant problems.
I heard that there is many immigrants in U.S.A and Russia.
>> I heard that there are many immigrants in the U.S.A and Russia.
I think immigrants are very poor, because they usually leave their country because there country always have fight with other countries or wars.
>> I think immigrants are very poor, they usually leave their country because their country always have fights with other countries or they are at war.
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