Are there any activities that you used to do but don\'t do anymore? Why did you stop?
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I used to play ballet for a few months.
I want to correct my body for my health.
But after I take a ballet lesson a month, I realized I don\'t like group lesson.
I just want to do some work out alone.
Then I don\'t have to feel awkward.
And If I feel not so good, I just don\'t go to the gym not paying attention money.
And It takes much less money to do work out alone at the gym.
Af first, I didn\'t care lesson fee.
It seems like very reasonable money to study something.
But days when I have to give moeny to academy coming, I feel not so good.
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Hello [이름]!
I could truly see your effort in writing this. Thanks for taking the time. See you tomorrow.
~~Teacher Kate
>>I used to do ballet for a few months.
I want to correct my body for my health.
I want to correct my body for my health.
>>I wanted to improve my health.
But after I take a ballet lesson a month, I realized I don\'t like group lesson.
But after I take a ballet lesson a month, I realized I don\'t like group lesson.
>>But after taking ballet lessons for a month, I realized I don\'t like group lessons.
I just want to do some work out alone.
I just want to do some work out alone.
>>I just want to work out alone.
Then I don\'t have to feel awkward.
Then I don\'t have to feel awkward.
>>CORRECT!
And If I feel not so good, I just don\'t go to the gym not paying attention money.
And If I feel not so good, I just don\'t go to the gym not paying attention money.
>>And If I don\'t feel so good, I just don\'t go to the gym and don\'t care about the money.
And It takes much less money to do work out alone at the gym.
And It takes much less money to do work out alone at the gym.
>>And It takes much less money to work out alone at the gym.
At first, I didn\'t care lesson fee.
At first, I didn\'t care lesson fee.
>>At first, I didn\'t care about the lesson fee.
It seems like very reasonable money to study something.
It seems like very reasonable money to study something.
>>CORRECT!
But days when I have to give moeny to academy coming, I feel not so good.
But days when I have to give moeny to academy coming, I feel not so good.
>>But on days when I have to pay money for academy classes, I don\'t feel so good.
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