Are there any activities that you used to do but don’t do anymore? Why did you stop?

2024-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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I was a member of a soccer team. I played soccer every Sunday morning. I felt refreshed after playing soccer.At that time, I could run faster than other players, and I could played 4 games a day. But now, I can run as fast as that time. After playing soccer, I can\'t walk well. I played soccer with my son two weeks ago. I ran just 5 minutes, but I couldn\'t breathe well and catch up with him. He wanted to play more, but I couldn\'t.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]ny!

That\'s the sign of aging. We can\'t compete with the energy of teenagers. You stopped playing regularly, so you wouldn\'t really feel your strength like before. I took care of my nephew yesterday and had to carry him, and mind you, he is 13 kilograms. Then, I woke up today with aching shoulders. Same pain, different reasons. ^^

~ Trixia

Content:

I was a member of a soccer team.

- CORRECT.

I played soccer every Sunday morning. I felt refreshed after playing soccer.

- I played soccer every Sunday morning and felt refreshed after.

At that time, I could run faster than other players, and I could played 4 games a day.

- At that time, I could run faster than other players, and I could play four games a day.

But now, I can run as fast as that time.

- CORRECT.

After playing soccer, I can\'t walk well.

- CORRECT.

I played soccer with my son two weeks ago.

- CORRECT.

I ran just 5 minutes, but I couldn\'t breathe well and catch up with him.

- I ran for just 5 minutes, but I couldn\'t breathe well enough to catch up with him.

He wanted to play more, but I couldn\'t.

- CORRECT.

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