Are there any activities that you want to do with your kids someday? and why? If none, why so?
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I would play some sports like a football and swim with my future kids.
I think the kids should go out and have physical activities.
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I would play some sports like a football and swim with my future kids.
>> I would love to play some sports like football and swimming with my future kids.
I think the kids should go out and have physical activities.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think kids must go out and have some physical activities.
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