Are there any fashion trends in the past you followed but think are silly looking now?

2015-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was in college, growing hair was in fashion and most young people kept their hair long even if they were not women.I was one of them and my hair was long enough to cover my ears and touched my chin.Although it took me so long to wash my hair and to dry, I thought I looked nicer than having short hair. When I look at the photographs of mine taken at that time, I looked weird and silly. It makes me laugh to think about how I came to think that I looked better with such ugly long hair. Back in the day, trousers with their bottoms belled out were once in trend. Only those who were trendy and fashionable wore the trousers and got so much attention from others. Now, they became just happening. People’s perception changes all the time, especially in fashion industry. Moreover, the fashion industry intentionally leads and drives the trend, so that their business can grow. There is nothing to criticize about the effort, however, we as an individual do not need to overreact to the trend.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]^^

Happy first Monday of the month. ^^

I hope that you will have a fabulous month ahead of you.

Thank you for sharing this story to me.

I was surprised that you had a long hair before.

Nowadays, most people want to color their hair.

What do you think about that?

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


When I was in college, growing hair was in fashion and most young people kept their hair long even if they were not women.

>> correct

>> OR: When I was in college, having a long hair was one of the fashion trends during that time.

I was one of them and my hair was long enough to cover my ears and touched my chin.

>> correct

Although it took me so long to wash my hair and to dry, I thought I looked nicer than having short hair.

>> correct

When I look at the photographs of mine taken at that time, I looked weird and silly.

>> correct

It makes me laugh to think about how I came to think that I looked better with such ugly long hair.

>> correct

Back in the day, trousers with their bottoms belled out were once in trend.

>> correct

Only those who were trendy and fashionable wore the trousers and got so much attention from others.

>> correct

Now, they became just happening.

>> Did you mean: Now, it just happened.

People’s perception changes all the time, especially in fashion industry.

>> correct

Moreover, the fashion industry intentionally leads and drives the trend, so that their business can grow.

>> correct

There is nothing to criticize about the effort, however, we as an individual do not need to overreact to the trend.

>> correct

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