Are there any fashion trends in the past you followed but think are silly looking now?
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Hi Sir [이름]^^
Happy first Monday of the month. ^^
I hope that you will have a fabulous month ahead of you.
Thank you for sharing this story to me.
I was surprised that you had a long hair before.
Nowadays, most people want to color their hair.
What do you think about that?
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
When I was in college, growing hair was in fashion and most young people kept their hair long even if they were not women.
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>> OR: When I was in college, having a long hair was one of the fashion trends during that time.
I was one of them and my hair was long enough to cover my ears and touched my chin.
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Although it took me so long to wash my hair and to dry, I thought I looked nicer than having short hair.
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When I look at the photographs of mine taken at that time, I looked weird and silly.
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It makes me laugh to think about how I came to think that I looked better with such ugly long hair.
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Back in the day, trousers with their bottoms belled out were once in trend.
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Only those who were trendy and fashionable wore the trousers and got so much attention from others.
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Now, they became just happening.
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People’s perception changes all the time, especially in fashion industry.
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Moreover, the fashion industry intentionally leads and drives the trend, so that their business can grow.
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There is nothing to criticize about the effort, however, we as an individual do not need to overreact to the trend.
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