Are there any foods that you wouldn\'t eat as a child that you eat now?
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We’re the same me too, I don’t want to eat eggplant. : )
Sincerely
T. James
Here are my corrections.
I have a few foods that i wouldn\'t eat as a child.
>>> I have a few foods that I wouldn\'t eat as a child.
They were aggplant and jellyfish.
>>> They were eggplant and jellyfish.
I felt weird when I bite them. mouthfeel was not good to me.
>>> I felt weird when I bite them. Mouthfeel was not good to me.
However, now i love to eat aggplant.
>>> However, now I love to eat eggplant.
It is very nutricious so much for us and delicious espasially, fried aggplant with oil.
>>> It is very nutritious so much for us and delicious, especially, fried eggplant with oil.
Also, I still try to eat jellyfish.
>>> CORRECT
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