Are there any hobbies you can do in other countries, but not your own?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can do most of the hobbies in Korea thanks to clear four seasons and globalization. However, I found out that there are not many people jogging because of the infrastructure. It was surprising to see that there are many joggers when I travel overseas. Many people freely run around parks or riverbank and regard jogging as a hobby. However, this trend is quite impossible in Korea because of the shortage of a place. There are only a few parks in Korea, and the riversides are always crowded with people. Running in the park will sometimes result in massive congestion in Korea, so few people are jogging.
강사 첨삭
Hello Aciel. Thank you for this. Here too, jogging outdoors is not common in most cities because of the very hot and humid climate.
- T. Beth
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I can do most of the hobbies in Korea thanks to clear four seasons and globalization. >>> correct
However, I found out that there are not many people jogging because of the infrastructure.
>>> correct
It was surprising to see that there are many joggers when I travel overseas.
>>> It was surprising to see that there were many joggers when I traveled overseas.
Many people freely run around parks or riverbank and regard jogging as a hobby.
>>> correct
However, this trend is quite impossible in Korea because of the shortage of a place.
>>> OR: However, this trend is quite impossible in Korea because of the shortage of space.
There are only a few parks in Korea, and the riversides are always crowded with people.
>>> correct
Running in the park will sometimes result in massive congestion in Korea, so few people are jogging.
>>> correct
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