Are there any hobbies you would like to try?
학생이 쓴 원문
The hobbies that I would like to try are reading and meditation. Reading is one of the most difficult things for me. Because, I am hard to understand what the book talks about. I can understand each sentence but I can\\\'t understand the whole story like economic or political book. And, meditation is the better way that one relax. Therefore, I would like to try this. Because we live a busy life, so we need a rest time. Finally, I would like to try to read and meditate.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Trina! Thank you for answering the homework. See you in our next class. Have a good day! :)
-Teacher Sophia
>> Correct
Reading is one of the most difficult things for me. Because, I am hard to understand what the book talks about.
>> Reading is one of the most difficult things for me because it\'s hard for me to understand what the book talks about.
I can understand each sentence but I can\\\'t understand the whole story like economic or political book.
>> I can understand each sentences, but I can\'t understand the story when it comes to economy or politics.
And, meditation is the better way that one relax.
>> And meditation is a better way for a person to relax.
Therefore, I would like to try this. Because we live a busy life, so we need a rest time.
>> Therefore, I would like to try this because we live a busy life, so we need a rest time.
Finally, I would like to try to read and meditate.
>> Correct
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