Are there any holidays that you really don’t like?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I don\'t like the Lunar new year day. It is because,
my family didn\'t take a rest in that day untill 2 years ago.
We went to the grandfather house every lunar new day and we prepare the ancestral rites. There was far of 3 hours on the car.
I made a lot of traditional food. And the house was small so that was full of whole family. It was uncomfortable when I slept.
But I liked to saw my grand parents but the were patriarchal person so they gave my parents hard time.
We couldn\'t take a rest in big holidays. When we came back home then a holiday was done. But when grandfather died. We stoped this rulse. I\'m sorry to my grandfather and I love him but it\'s good things that we quit. At last, We will really rest and relex on the holidays.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
I understand your situation during your holidays on New Year. Well, that is your tradition to follow. It is the time to bond with your relatives. ^^ Check your spelling in writing. ^^
~T. Maine
>> Actually, I don\'t like Lunar New Year\'s day.
It is because, my family didn\'t take a rest in that day untill 2 years ago.
>> It is because my family didn\'t take some rest on that day for 2 years.
We went to the grandfather house every lunar new day and we prepare the ancestral rites.
We went to the grandfather house every lunar new day and we prepare the ancestral rites.
>> We went to my grandfather\'s house every Lunar New Year\'s day and prepare the ancestral rites.
There was far of 3 hours on the car.
>>It was far there and it takes 3 hours by car.
I made a lot of traditional food.
I made a lot of traditional food.
>> Correct.
And the house was small so that was full of whole family.
>> And the house was small so it was full of my relatives.
It was uncomfortable when I slept.
>> Correct.
But I liked to saw my grand parents but the were patriarchal person so they gave my parents hard time.
But I liked to saw my grand parents but the were patriarchal person so they gave my parents hard time.
>> But I like to see my grandparents. There were patriarchal people so they gave my parents a hard time.
We couldn\'t take a rest in big holidays.
We couldn\'t take a rest in big holidays.
>> We couldn\'t take a rest on big holidays.
When we came back home then a holiday was done.
>> When we came back home, the holiday was done.
But when grandfather died. We stoped this rulse.
>> But when my grandfather died we stopped this culture.
I\'m sorry to my grandfather and I love him but it\'s good things that we quit.
>> I\'m sorry to my grandfather. I love him but it\'s a good thing we quit doing it.
At last, We will really rest and relex on the holidays.
>> At last, we will really have some rest and relaxation on holidays.
^^
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.