Are there any national film awards in your country? Do you think that such festivals are important f
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Korea has a Backsang Arts Awards which one of the famous Korean film awards. I like this. Film industry is very important to get a chance to show our culture to the world and we can export them. It has to be developed more and it could be helpful.
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>>> Korea has Baeksang Arts Awards which is one of the famous Korean film awards.
I like this.
>>> CORRECT =)
Film industry is very important to get a chance to show our culture to the world and we can export them.
>>> It\'s very important for the film industry to get a chance to showcase our culture to the world and be known internationally.
It has to be developed more and it could be helpful.
>>> CORRECT =)
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