Are there any parts of the city where you live which you are afraid to visit after dark? Where? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I’m afraid to visit Incheon Metropolitan City after dark.
the reason why I’m afraid to visit ‘Incheon’ is that ‘Incheon’ called ‘devildom’.
it is so disgraceful name to ‘incheon’, but, many crimes happened to ‘Incheon’
and a lot of police officer doesn\'t want to work there.
that is why I don’t like to visit Incheon after dark
강사 첨삭
Hello Mo!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
>> CORRECT!
the reason why I’m afraid to visit ‘Incheon’ is that ‘Incheon’ called ‘devildom’.
the reason why I’m afraid to visit ‘Incheon’ is that ‘Incheon’ called ‘devildom’.
>> The reason why I’m afraid to visit Incheon is because it is called \"Devildom\".
it is so disgraceful name to ‘incheon’, but, many crimes happened to ‘Incheon’
it is so disgraceful name to ‘incheon’, but, many crimes happened to ‘Incheon’
>> It is a disgraceful name for Incheon, but it\'s because many crimes happens in Incheon.
and a lot of police officer doesn\'t want to work there.
and a lot of police officer doesn\'t want to work there.
>> A lot of police officers doesn\'t want to work there.
that is why I don’t like to visit Incheon after dark
that is why I don’t like to visit Incheon after dark
>> That is why I don\'t like to visit Incheon after dark.
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