Are there any perks of being single???

2019-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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There is 2 reasons that being single is good. First, I can sleep lately. Now I can\'t sleep lately. Because my parents are scold me. Second, I can trip other country. Trip alone is cheaper than trip with my family.

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There is 2 reasons that being single is good.
>>There are 2 reasons why being single is good.

First, I can sleep lately.
>>First, I can sleep late.

 Now I can\'t sleep lately.
>> Now, I can\'t sleep late.

Because my parents are scold me.
>>My parents will scold me.

Second, I can trip other country. 
>>Second, I can have trips to other countries.

Trip alone is cheaper than trip with my family.
>>Having a trip alone is cheaper than having a trip with my family.

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