Are there any places you are afraid to visit because of the high crime rate? If so, where?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes I do, and there is Paris.
A lot of people think that Paris is not that dangerous to visit in South Korea, but I heard that it isn\'t.
I heard that the side of the city is one of the most dangerous places from the crimes.
So there is a movie about this.
Because of this reason, I am little afraid to visit Paris because of its high crime rate.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]?
Wow. Is it true? I\'m surprised. I don\'t want to go to Paris anymore suddenly haha. Anyway thanks for sharing. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>Yes I do, and that is Paris.
A lot of people think that Paris is not that dangerous to visit in South Korea, but I heard that it isn\'t.
A lot of people think that Paris is not that dangerous to visit in South Korea, but I heard that it isn\'t.
>>A lot of people think that Paris is not that dangerous to visit for South Koreans, but I heard that it is.
I heard that the side of the city is one of the most dangerous places from the crimes.
I heard that the side of the city is one of the most dangerous places from the crimes.
>>I heard that a part of the city is one of the most dangerous places because of crimes committed there.
So there is a movie about this.
So there is a movie about this.
>>CORRECT!
Because of this reason, I am little afraid to visit Paris because of its high crime rate.
Because of this reason, I am little afraid to visit Paris because of its high crime rate.
>>CORRECT!
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