Are there any punishments related to breaking the Social Distancing protocol?

2021-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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No, there aren’t, but it looks like an ethical code of behaviors. To make people follow the protocol, we conduct a campaign every day through various mass media. Every other week, our government announces what level of Covid 19 we are in to alert people. This announcement insists on us keeping the social distancing protocol as the top priority to protect ourselves from the virus. However, though there are no direct punishments related to it, there are restrictions derived from the protocol. For example, at the restaurants, cafes, and wedding ceremonies, etc. how many people can assemble at one time is set up by proportions according to the size of the area. If store owners break the rule, they have to pay a fine. In the case of a family gathering, at most four people can gather at a time. That sounds funny, isn’t it? Though, we need to follow this protocol for living with Covid19.

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Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


No, there aren’t, but it looks like an ethical code of behaviors. 
>> CORRECT!
To make people follow the protocol, we conduct a campaign every day through various mass media.
>> CORRECT!
 Every other week, our government announces what level of Covid 19 we are in to alert people. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >>  Every other week, our government announces what level of this pandemic we are in to alert people. 
This announcement insists on us keeping the social distancing protocol as the top priority to protect ourselves from the virus.
>> CORRECT!
However, though there are no direct punishments related to it, there are restrictions derived from the protocol.
>> CORRECT!
 For example, at the restaurants, cafes, and wedding ceremonies, etc. how many people can assemble at one time is set up by proportions according to the size of the area.
>> CORRECT!
 If store owners break the rule, they have to pay a fine. 
>> CORRECT!
In the case of a family gathering, at most four people can gather at a time. 
>> CORRECT!
That sounds funny, isn’t it? 
>> CORRECT!
Though, we need to follow this protocol for living with Covid19.
>> CORRECT!

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