Are there any special holidays or celebrations that people might want to experience at your place?
학생이 쓴 원문
This Christmas I want to invite my friends and cook or delivery some foods. Sometimes, whenever I cook something and upload a photo to SNS, my friends asked me cook for them too.
I love cooking for people around me. So when I was living alone in college, I sometimes cooked food to my friends or I baked scones myself and distributed them to my friends.
I\'ve never done it before, but I think a potluck party would be fun :)
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Hyebin. That sounds amazing! Cooking and sharing food with friends is a wonderful way to celebrate Christmas. A potluck party idea is brilliant, and I\'m sure it will be loads of fun! 😊 Thanks for this. Have a relaxing day ahead!
~T. Jade^^
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Are there any special holidays or celebrations that people might want to experience at your place?
This, Christmas I want to invite my friends and cook or delivery some foods.
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Sometimes, whenever I cook something and upload a photo to SNS, my friends asked me cook for them too.
>> Sometimes, whenever I cook something and upload a photo to SNS, my friends ask me to cook for them too.
I love cooking for people around me.
I love cooking for people around me.
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So when I was living alone in college, I sometimes cooked food to my friends, or I baked scones myself and distributed them to my friends.
>> Correct
I\'ve never done it before, but I think a potluck party would be fun :)
I\'ve never done it before, but I think a potluck party would be fun :)
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