Are there any sports you can\'t stand to see on TV? What are they and why don\'t you like them?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can\'t stand to see a golf championship on TV.
Everytimes my father prefer to see a golf on TV in my home, I cannot understand why my father like it.
And I think my mother cannot understand too. So evertimes my father watch it, my mother scold him.
I think that I don\'t understand golf rules and I am not interested in playing a golf.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ian!
I really appreciate that you try to do your homework even when you\'re busy. There were only minor corrections in your composition. You are doing great and improving. Keep it up!
-T. Caitlyn
I can\'t stand to see a golf championship on TV.
>> CORRECT
Everytimes my father prefer to see a golf on TV in my home, I cannot understand why my father like it.
Everytimes my father prefer to see a golf on TV in my home, I cannot understand why my father like it.
>> Every time my father prefers to see golf on TV at home, I cannot understand why he likes it.
And I think my mother cannot understand too. So evertimes my father watch it, my mother scold him.
And I think my mother cannot understand too. So evertimes my father watch it, my mother scold him.
>> And I think my mother cannot understand it too so she scolds him every time he watches it.
I think that I don\'t understand golf rules and I am not interested in playing a golf.
>> I think that I don\'t understand golf rules and I am not interested in playing golf.
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