Are there any types of seafood you dislike or avoid? What is it about them that you don’t enjoy?

2024-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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I really like seafood. Before, I couldn\'t eat king crab or salmon imported from overseas often because they were expensive, but now I eat them often. I enjoy seafood of all kinds. I mostly like to eat raw fish, steamed crab, and boiled shellfish. There are almost no seafood that I dislike or avoid, but if I had to say it, pufferfish is poisonous and I could die if I just ate it, so I have to eat it at a restaurant that specializes in pufferfish. Also, I don\'t really like sea cucumbers that look disgusting. I also tend to avoid shellfish that are too large because they are too big to eat. I like and enjoy all other seafood.

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Happy Tuesday, [이름]! 

Seafood is a high-protein food that is low in calo- ries, total fat, and saturated fat. High in vitamins and minerals, seafood has been shown to have numerous health benefits. It reduces the risk of cardiac disease for the general population and provides essential nutrients during fetal growth and development.

- Kristine ^^ 

I really like seafood.
>> Correct.
Before, I couldn\'t eat king crab or salmon imported from overseas often because they were expensive, but now I eat them often.
>> I couldn’t eat king crab or salmon imported from overseas often because they were expensive, but now I eat them frequently.
I enjoy seafood of all kinds. 
>> I enjoy all kinds of seafood.
I mostly like to eat raw fish, steamed crab, and boiled shellfish.
>> Correct.
There are almost no seafood that I dislike or avoid, but if I had to say it, pufferfish is poisonous and I could die if I just ate it, so I have to eat it at a restaurant that specializes in pufferfish.
>> There are almost no types of seafood that I dislike or avoid, but if I had to choose, it would be pufferfish. Since it\'s poisonous and can be deadly if not prepared correctly, I make sure to eat it only at a restaurant that specializes in pufferfish.
Also, I don\'t really like sea cucumbers that look disgusting. 
>> Also, I don’t really like sea cucumbers because I find them unappealing.
I also tend to avoid shellfish that are too large because they are too big to eat.
>> I also tend to avoid shellfish that are too large because they’re difficult to eat.
I like and enjoy all other seafood.
>> I like and enjoy all other types of seafood.

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