Are there any values that your parents tried to make you follow but you weren\'t good at doing?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hmmmmmm you know, most parents tend to say you must study to their child in South Korea. But my parents didn\'t do it to me, just you\'re going to do something whatever you want to. And whether you reach a success or not, it\'s your responsibility. So I tried a lot of things like playing a piano and guitar, learning a 3D of auto cad and etc. But it sounds sad that I didn\'t reach a goal of mine.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful Monday, Elic! If it is your dream to change the world, then keep learning. Education is the most efficient key to effect the change you desire to see in the world. The more you keep learning the more you discover new things and explore new opportunities.
Hmmmmmm you know, most parents tend to say you must study to their child in South Korea.
>> Hmmmm you know, most Korean parents tend to say to study hard.
But my parents didn\'t do it to me, just you\'re going to do something whatever you want to.
>> But my parents didn\'t do it to me, they just told me to do whatever I want.
And whether you reach a success or not, it\'s your responsibility.
>> And whether you\'ll be successful or not, it\'s your responsibility.
So I tried a lot of things like playing a piano and guitar, learning a 3D of auto cad and etc. But it sounds sad that I didn\'t reach a goal of mine.
>> So I tried a lot of things like playing the piano and guitar, learning 3D AutoCAD, etc. But it sounds sad that I wasn\'t able to reach any goals.
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