Are there any values that your parents tried to make you follow but you weren’t good at doing?
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In my case, I was directed to do things and to behave in the way they were brought up.
It is difficult to meet my parents\' expectations.
I am so happy to know you better.
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Teacher Nina
My parents didn’t say anything to me when I grew up.
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They have not tried to direct me to do things or to behave in a certain way.
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Instead, they have set themselves as good examples of life by acting than saying.
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They are honest, hard-working and loved their children from the bottom of their hearts.
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The most important value they care about is to respect others, be polite, and not to cause others and their neighbors any trouble.
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They don’t want to own their neighbors anything.
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I can say they are somewhat naïve in the sense that they are not clever enough in making a fortune.
>> ( I\'m sorry, what do you mean with this word, \" naïve \" ?)
To make money, you should sometime be flexible, political, take a risk and adapt yourself to the changing environment.
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However, my parents have lived in a small town in the countryside, so they didn’t think of taking a journey like trying other things other than farming, outside their hometown.
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In conclusion, they are not affluent financially, but they are the real persons who still possess the value of humanism
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