Are there any values that your parents tried to make you follow but you weren’t good at doing?

2015-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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My parents didn’t say anything to me when I grew up. They have not tried to direct me to do things or to behave in a certain way. Instead, they have set themselves as good examples of life by acting than saying. They are honest, hard-working and loved their children from the bottom of their hearts. The most important value they care about is to respect others, be polite, and not to cause others and their neighbors any trouble. They don’t want to own their neighbors anything. I can say they are somewhat naïve in the sense that they are not clever enough in making a fortune. To make money, you should sometime be flexible, political, take a risk and adapt yourself to the changing environment. However, my parents have lived in a small town in the countryside, so they didn’t think of taking a journey like trying other things other than farming, outside their hometown. In conclusion, they are not affluent financially, but they are the real persons who still possess the value of humanism

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!

Yipee! The day we are all waiting for!

Happy Friday to you!

Thanks for your time. ^^

Wow! I admire your parents. ^^

In my case, I was directed to do things and to behave in the way they were brought up.

It is difficult to meet my parents\' expectations.

I am so happy to know you better.

See you in class.
Teacher Nina


My parents didn’t say anything to me when I grew up.

>> correct

They have not tried to direct me to do things or to behave in a certain way.

>> correct

Instead, they have set themselves as good examples of life by acting than saying.

>> correct

They are honest, hard-working and loved their children from the bottom of their hearts.

>> correct

The most important value they care about is to respect others, be polite, and not to cause others and their neighbors any trouble.

>> correct

They don’t want to own their neighbors anything.

>> correct

I can say they are somewhat naïve in the sense that they are not clever enough in making a fortune.

>> ( I\'m sorry, what do you mean with this word, \" naïve \" ?)

To make money, you should sometime be flexible, political, take a risk and adapt yourself to the changing environment.

>> correct

However, my parents have lived in a small town in the countryside, so they didn’t think of taking a journey like trying other things other than farming, outside their hometown. 

>> correct

In conclusion, they are not affluent financially, but they are the real persons who still possess the value of humanism

>> correct


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