Are there better and worse ways to respond to one\'s own anger? What are those?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hi! Happy Friday!
Have a great weekend!
Homework: Are there better and worse ways to respond to one\'s own anger? What are those?
Good ways is take a deep breath. Bad ways is have a quarrel. If you select bad ways, you will regret.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tony! Happy weekend!
Until the next one! See you on Monday! :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>A good way is to take a deep breath.
Bad ways is have a quarrel.
>>A bad way is to quarrel.
OR>>A bad way is fighting.
If you select bad ways, you will regret.
>>If you selected bad ways, you will regret it.
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