Are there gender role biased issues in your country? What are they?
학생이 쓴 원문
This has often been a problem.
Many people have a prejudice that women should be gentle and men should not cry.
These days, however, there are few people who think this way, and everyone is trying to achieve gender equality.
강사 첨삭
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Many people have a prejudice that women should be gentle and men should not cry.
These days, however, there are few people who think this way, and everyone is trying to achieve gender equality.
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This has often been a problem.
>> CORRECT!
Many people have a prejudice that women should be gentle and men should not cry.
>> CORRECT!
These days, however, there are few people who think this way, and everyone is trying to achieve gender equality.
>> These days, however, there are still some few people who think this way, and everyone is trying to achieve gender equality.
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