Are there pickpockets in your country? Write about pickpocketing in Korea.
학생이 쓴 원문
The pickpockets no in the my country don\'t get pickpockets if leave the phone but my country have many bicycle thieves.
강사 첨삭
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Are there pickpockets in your country? Write about pickpocketing in Korea.
The pickpockets no in the my country don\'t get pickpockets if leave the phone but my country have many bicycle thieves.
>>> There are no pickpockets in my country. You won’t get pickpocketed if you leave your phone unattended, but my country does have many bicycle thieves.
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