Are there special foods connected with the holiday?
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What kind of food do you enjoy eating on special days?
Today, I would like to introduce a little bit about Korean people\'s holidays, including me, and foods like traditional foods that I enjoy eating on the day.
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The first is New Year\'s Day, January 1. This day is called \'Happy New Years Day\' in English-speaking countries.
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On this day, we eat \'tteokguk\' in Korea, which is boiled with rice cake, eggs and broth.
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Put laver on it and it looks beautiful.
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It is very delicious and healthy.
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It is the representative food on New Year\'s Day.
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Also, the second is Chuseok. This is called \"Thanksgiving Day\" in English-speaking countries.
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This holiday falls on August 15th and Koreans eat mostly the Korean traditional food, \'Songpyeon.\'
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You can make rice cakes and put a variety of sweet grains inside. It tastes great.
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Today, I did research on special foods that I enjoy eating on the day with various holidays. Thank you.
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