Are there special foods connected with the holiday?

Hi, Today I will explain to you special foods connected with the holiday.

>>Hi, Today I will explain to you the special foods that are connected with the holidays.

So, please see carefully to me essay. (My teacher give same topic to me)

>>So, please look at my essay carefully. (My teacher give same topic to me)

First of all, One of the Korean traditional holiday is \"Pepero Day\".

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In this day, Many People eat Pepero. Oh, Do you know Pepero? Peperos are made by melting a little black chocolate over a long, grilled stick.

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 This cake was made by Lotte Confectionery and Pepero Day is the day when some two girls were told by Lotte Confectionery.

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