Are there strong laws in your country to prevent discrimination?
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Your answer is too hot policies issue in Korea.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Your answer touches upon a sensitive
policy issue in Korea.
Korean parliament discusses this issue for many years.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The Korean parliament has been
discussing this issue for many years.
Discrimination includes religion, region, and sexual issues.
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Gender equality is an important policy issue
too, nowadays.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Gender equality is also an important
policy issue nowadays.
But it can not be consensus what is discrimination.
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OR>>However, achieving a consensus on what
constitutes discrimination can be challenging.
They didn\'t think about human equality, they think about only their political
interest.
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OR>>They seem to prioritize their political
interests rather than considering human equality.
I disgust by politician attitude toward the discrimination law.
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