are these correct?

2021-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

Were it not for personal tastes and values, we could gain a \"right\" answer for everyone. Your experience and wisdom will make you have a good judgement. remember that the arrangement of items in a store is deliberate I know that you don’t mean to buy a lot more things in addition to your originally planned purchase. We are sometimes shocked by our impulsive purchases. ask yourself these questions before you make any purchase. Otherwise, you may waste all of your money. If [이름]ers had not had air tunnel, they could not have gotten enough fresh air from outside. Thus, [이름]ers made their own rules here. Each [이름]er is not allowed to eat a lot of food all at once. Right after [이름]ers were rescued, they seemed to have been bothered severely by the high heat They had to make sensible decisions. They only had extremely small quantities of food. This impressive and extraordinary story ended with a triumph of engineering.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]a!

You did really well on your sentences! Great job! ^^

~Teacher Gina

Were it not for personal tastes and values, we could gain a \"right\" answer for everyone.
>> CORRECT.
Your experience and wisdom will make you have a good judgement.
>> CORRECT.
Remember that the arrangement of items in a store is deliberate.
>> CORRECT.
I know that you don’t mean to buy a lot more things in addition to your originally planned purchase.
>> CORRECT.
We are sometimes shocked by our impulsive purchases.
>> CORRECT.
ask yourself these questions before you make any purchase. Otherwise, you may waste all of your money.
>> CORRECT.
If [이름]ers had not had air tunnel, they could not have gotten enough fresh air from outside.
>> If [이름]ers had not had an air tunnel, they could not have gotten enough fresh air from outside.
Thus, [이름]ers made their own rules here. Each [이름]er is not allowed to eat a lot of food all at once.
>> CORRECT.
Right after [이름]ers were rescued, they seemed to have been bothered severely by the high heat.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Right after [이름]ers were rescued, they seemed to have been bothered severely by the heat.
>> Or: Right after [이름]ers were rescued, they seemed to have been bothered severely by the high temperature.
They had to make sensible decisions.
>> CORRECT.
They only had extremely small quantities of food.
>> CORRECT.
This impressive and extraordinary story ended with a triumph of engineering.
>> CORRECT.

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