Are these correct?
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Ordinary People Surrounded with the Faces of Beautiful People in Advertising Everyday
The Way You Can Become More Famous: Your Association with the Group of Advertisers
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Thank you for submitting your sentences today! ^^
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~Teacher Gina
This box is half full but no useful item is included.
>> CORRECT.
Ordinary People Surrounded with the Faces of Beautiful People in Advertising every day.
>> Ordinary people are surrounded with beautiful faces every day because of advertising.
The Way You Can Become More Famous: Your Association with the Group of Advertisers
>> CORRECT.
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